On this day, I have a great day. Why I said it is a great day? It is because I have new experiences that I had through today. First, my family have done a small feast. We invited our neighbours to join us. We served 'Ikan Talapia Bakar' as our lunch together. As a family, we helped each other as our preparation for lunch. My father asked me to cut banana leaf from the banana stem. Honestly, I never do this thing before. At least I knew how to cut after this. My father asked me to cut because we will eat rice with Ikan Talapia Bakar on banana leaf. Wow!So delicious and I thought it is easy to eat on banana leaf than on plate. Why?After we have finished eating, we do not need to wash our plate anymore..hahaha...Such a great experienced that I had through to today.On that night we celebrated my neighbour's daughter birthday. We celebrated with a delicious cake made from Secret Recipe that her father bought it. So delicious!
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BalasPadamCorrections:
BalasPadam1)since you are describing the past event, you have to write in past tense..therefore, will=would, do=did
2) such a great experienced
the correct one is 'such a great experience' because 'experienced' is an adjective and 'experience' is a noun..since great is an adjective, it should be followed by a noun which is 'experience'..=)
* No more holiday after this...haha